Repost :/ I'd really like some feedback...

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Feb 13, 2014

Molly S.

Http://chaoticmakeup.blogspot.com/
please help?

Feb 13, 2014

Lauren L.

Okay I just opened it up and may I just suggest this: perhaps change your font to something more readable I mean I can still read it but its a little hard with all the curlicues and pretty things. something more simple would be better. Also make your font color darker:) hope this helps.

Feb 13, 2014

Molly S.

Thankyou <3 I've been thinking I'll change the theme to something darker.

Feb 13, 2014

Lauren L.

I think you have great pictures and lots of instructions though which is good. Like your "awkward first blog post" too ;). Yea a darker theme might be cool like a dark purple background where you currently have orange and a gradient red where you have light blue and writing in black:).

Feb 13, 2014

Lauren L.

Oh also in your writing you have many "I took this color here" "I applied this color here" I used this color here". I know it's hard to mix it up when soon instructions maybe have some be like " I used this gorgeous color,_ because it _ and highlights my _". Or something like "And then I started on my brow bone and applied this there" or you can just change the order and say "the next shade I applied was this". Hope it makes sense :)

Feb 13, 2014

Molly S.

Thankyou so much! Gunna work on changing the theme tonight :)

Feb 13, 2014

Lauren L.

Omg sorry I meant "saying instructions"