Opinions and Constructive Criticism

Dec 14, 2012

Nicole C.

Love the colors!

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Kayleen, I know what you mean about both issues with the liner, I didn't notice the rough edge until I put the pictures on my computer and I usually leave the tape on that I used for my eyeshadow to do my eyeliner, but with the liner I was using the tape would fray the tip sometimes so I just decided to wing it. (lol see what I did there) but obviously it didn't come out as planned.
And if you're curious, I used Maybelline Great Lash Lots of Lashes on my eyelashes.
Thanks again for your advice. :) 

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Thanks Nicole! :)  

Dec 14, 2012

Vanessa C.

I agree with Kayleen. Also, the waterline isn't completely lined at the outter part. 

Dec 14, 2012

Vanessa C.

I agree with Kayleen. Also, the waterline isn't completely lined at the outter part. 

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Vanessa, That was another flaw I noticed. The eyeliner, as you can see, wasn't that productive. lol. It was the covergirl Liquiline Blast stuff. I used to like it but then I got my Maybelline gel liner and realized how mediocre it was. Thanks for the comment. :) 

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Anyone else want to add on? I am open to suggestions. This isn't my favorite look and something just doesn't feel right about it. 

Dec 14, 2012

Courtney B.

I think the only thing I would change is that your crease and eyeliner aren't even. They're just *slightly* apart and that little space seems like it shouldn't be there. Other than that, I think it looks good! I love the color combo, the pop of yellow is so much more interesting than the typical white that you see in the inner corner.

Dec 14, 2012

Courtney B.

Oh, I didn't realize Kayleen had already mentioned that. Sorry!

Dec 14, 2012

Letty B.

It looks pretty nice I think that yellow is a little too bright for the look but my opinion

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Thanks Courtney, and like I mentioned to Kayleen I didn't use my usual procedure. And the yellow was one of my favorite things about it.

Thanks, Letty. :) 

Dec 14, 2012

Natalie T.

I like it a lot! It reminds me of a little elegant swan in the colors and lines =)

I also like what you did there with the "wing it" joke I laughed out loud =P

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Thanks Natalie! I thought the same thing; some cute bird of sorts.
And yeah, that wing joke, I worked really hard on it. lol :p Glad you like. 

Dec 14, 2012

Kayla N.

Looks great! Just blow the grey out more so it lines up with the eyeliner. 

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Thanks, Kayla. And now that everyone's pointing out the line and I know it's there it won't stop bothering me. lol. I just want to go back and fix it! But I can't because I created this yesterday. Ah! lol

Dec 14, 2012

Stefy S.

I really like the look overall! Maybe a little off on execution, but you're a talented lady. I'm sure you'll get it flawless next time. :)

Dec 14, 2012

Nicolette G.

The only thing I would add is grooming the.brows a bit because I can see the hairs on the lid. That along with everything else everyone said would make the look really polished.

Dec 14, 2012

Dana K.

Thanks, Stefy and Nicolette. :)
Nicolette, I keep on looking at my brows as the days go by and I really need to tame them but I'm just too lazy. lol. It's terrible, I know.